Sometimes everything has to be enscribed across the heavens so you can find the one line already written inside you. Sometimes it takes a great sky to find that small, bright, and indescribable wedge of freedom in your own heart. David Whyte

Haiku: Autumn’s Echo

on October 3, 2018

Fall creeping slowly
From my window in distance
Few pale yellow leaves

Autumn blaze absence
Off-kilter moral compass
In step with the times

11 responses to “Haiku: Autumn’s Echo

  1. Dale says:

    It is a “slow” autumn here as well. I was driving this morning and noting the few trees that have started. This time last year was a whole ‘nother story!
    Lovely haiku, of course…

  2. Wow.

    Good job. And a fine ending line.

  3. Eric Alagan says:

    Perhaps Mother Nature is hinting that she does not change to a human calendar. She changes when she wants to.

    Love both your haiku 🙂

  4. InfiniteZip says:

    I miss the changing colors, each year seems different the older I get, but it still moves at its own pace I suppose. Perhaps I grow impatient for the vibrance of Autumn 🙂

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