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Dark tree branch fingers
Like unearthly sea coral
Trace patterns on sky

Posted in Dawn Sky, Haiku, Oak tree out my window

Tags: Dawn sky, Haiku, View from my window

9 responses to “Haiku: Daybreak Silhouette”

1. Dale says:

   March 19, 2018 at 9:18 pm

   Sounds almost spooky…

   Reply
   • vivachange77 says:

     March 20, 2018 at 3:43 pm

     I hadn’t seen it in that light. Now I see that my Haiku does have a spooky aura. Thanks.

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     • Dale says:

       March 20, 2018 at 4:39 pm

       Funny how people perceive our writing, sometimes…😉

     • vivachange77 says:

       March 20, 2018 at 5:31 pm

       Yes, I guess that is part of the mystery of words.

     • Dale says:

       March 20, 2018 at 5:37 pm

       😁

2. Eric Alagan says:

   March 20, 2018 at 12:06 am

   Now, that’s very visual.
   Good one, Ina 🙂
   Cheers,
   Eric

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3. vivachange77 says:

   March 20, 2018 at 3:37 pm

   Thanks, Eric. That is what I had in mind.

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4. Heath Muchena says:

   April 26, 2018 at 4:50 pm

   Atmospheric! Good writing

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   • vivachange77 says:

     April 26, 2018 at 4:52 pm

     Thanks, Heath.

     Reply

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