Searching gloomy skies
Cowpoke spies hole of sunlight
Loops rope to catch rays
Written in response to Daily Prompt: Loophole
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Sometimes everything has to be enscribed across the heavens so you can find the one line already written inside you. Sometimes it takes a great sky to find that small, bright, and indescribable wedge of freedom in your own heart. David Whyte
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I love this haiku – the physical with the metaphysical 🙂
Thanks, Eric. I never thought of my haiku that way.
I love your talent with words. What a great haiku! Thank you and greetings.
Many thanks for your comment. Glad you like it.
A wonderful haiku
Thanks. 🙂
I love the off-beats of the 2nd line. A charming, visual haiku!
Thanks for your thoughtful comment. 🙂
And I said to myself, ‘one more.’ So glad I did. This is just amazing use of words! Thank you.
I appreciate your discerning comment. Thanks.