cronechronicler

Exploring the poetry of everyday life

Haiku: Double Vision

on December 5, 2017

Looking out window
This dark wind-howling morning
Everything is black

Bright room behind me
Transforms window to mirror
Reflects me instead


16 responses to “Haiku: Double Vision

  1. Dale says:

    Was crazy-windy here, too.
    Loved the reflection of your light…

  2. den169 says:

    An invitation to be present with you!

  3. A lovely juxtaposition of warmth with the stormy weather outside.

  4. Skillful display of artistic competence. Love it!

    • vivachange77 says:

      Thanks for your comment that you see “artistic competence” in this. It always surprises me when people like you respond to something in my poetry that I didn’t realize is there. ❤

  5. Christy B says:

    A reflection of you ~ A lovely ending to this one!

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