cronechronicler

Small tender brown roots
Branching underground downward
Crumble foundations

Posted in Haiku, Hope, Mustard seeds

Tags: A suffering world, Haiku, Hope, Poetry, Tenacity

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12 responses to “Haiku: Never Under Estimate”

1. Lynz Real Cooking says:

   November 10, 2017 at 8:03 pm

   Very nice

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2. vivachange77 says:

   November 10, 2017 at 8:45 pm

   Thank you, Lynn

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3. Andrea Stephenson says:

   November 10, 2017 at 8:53 pm

   So true, the hidden things are often the strongest.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     November 10, 2017 at 9:19 pm

     Right, Andrea. I was thinking of the tree roots and chipmunks who are destroying my son’s concrete steps.

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4. haveyouevernoticedblog says:

   November 12, 2017 at 1:51 am

   You have a way with words..so crisp and bright

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   • vivachange77 says:

     November 12, 2017 at 12:13 pm

     Thanks so very much for your comment. 🙂

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5. t. l. cummings says:

   November 17, 2017 at 8:55 pm

   Strength in tenderness. Well said.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     November 17, 2017 at 10:40 pm

     Thanks. that is just what I meant.

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6. Heath Muchena says:

   November 18, 2017 at 11:51 pm

   Sensible and succinct

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   • vivachange77 says:

     November 18, 2017 at 11:54 pm

     Thanks, Heath.

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7. ivychaste says:

   December 17, 2017 at 8:28 pm

   Interesting because roots have the strength to shatter concrete foundations and raise new generations. Nice haiku, for sure!

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   • vivachange77 says:

     December 17, 2017 at 9:04 pm

     I like your comment especially because I never thought of roots also raising new generations. And of course they do. Thanks.

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