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Soft rose glow in sky
Low clouds hug the horizon
Comfort broken earth

Posted in A suffering world, Dawn Sky, Haiku, View from my window

Tags: A suffering world, Dawn sky, Haiku, Poetry, View from my window

8 responses to “Haiku: Security Blanket”

1. Andrea Stephenson says:

   November 8, 2017 at 8:08 pm

   That’s gorgeous Ina, I love that poignant image of the clouds hugging the earth.

   Reply
   • vivachange77 says:

     November 8, 2017 at 8:10 pm

     Thank you, Andrea.

     Reply
2. t. l. cummings says:

   November 8, 2017 at 10:38 pm

   lovely

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   • vivachange77 says:

     November 9, 2017 at 7:34 pm

     Thanks, t. l.

     Reply
3. Eric Alagan says:

   November 8, 2017 at 11:57 pm

   Warmth of your embrace
   Like a balm removes sorrows
   Mothers give, receive
   –
   Hello Ina,
   Your haiku, so lovely, prompted this.
   Thank you for allowing me to share,
   Eric

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   • vivachange77 says:

     November 9, 2017 at 7:31 pm

     Hi, Eric. Your poem in response is beautiful and comforting. Thanks.

     Reply
4. Paul F. Lenzi says:

   November 9, 2017 at 3:54 am

   love the tucked in feel

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   • vivachange77 says:

     November 9, 2017 at 12:10 pm

     Thanks, Paul. That is just what I meant.

     Reply

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