Sometimes everything has to be enscribed across the heavens so you can find the one line already written inside you. Sometimes it takes a great sky to find that small, bright, and indescribable wedge of freedom in your own heart. David Whyte

Haiku: Celestial Gift

on June 8, 2017

Round moon in night sky
Casts bright beam on my carpet
Restores gentle peace

12 responses to “Haiku: Celestial Gift

  1. Cethru Cellophane says:

    Ina you play tricks on my eyes. I had to read this several times before I realized the word was MOON not Noon. My eyes are dim…where’s my cane?

    • vivachange77 says:

      I get it, Nigel. Your comment made me look closely to see if I had indeed written MOON. I have one working eye and sport a wonderful Rollator walker that I bought after my 93 year old friend got hers so she could run in short bursts.

  2. Dale says:


  3. Viv, you captured it wonderfully. I’m always taken with how gracefully you use language.

  4. Christy B says:

    Ohhhh this is so different than the reputation of the full moon for bringing out the crazies 😉 I’m so glad it brings you a sense of peace instead ❤

  5. Beautiful Ina, I feel peaceful in the circle of that light.

  6. vivachange77 says:

    Thank you, Andrea.

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