Exploring the poetry of everyday life

Haiku: Celestial Gift

on June 8, 2017

Round moon in night sky
Casts bright beam on my carpet
Restores gentle peace

12 responses to “Haiku: Celestial Gift

  1. Cethru Cellophane says:

    Ina you play tricks on my eyes. I had to read this several times before I realized the word was MOON not Noon. My eyes are dim…where’s my cane?

    • vivachange77 says:

      I get it, Nigel. Your comment made me look closely to see if I had indeed written MOON. I have one working eye and sport a wonderful Rollator walker that I bought after my 93 year old friend got hers so she could run in short bursts.

  2. Viv, you captured it wonderfully. I’m always taken with how gracefully you use language.

  3. Christy B says:

    Ohhhh this is so different than the reputation of the full moon for bringing out the crazies 😉 I’m so glad it brings you a sense of peace instead ❤

  4. Beautiful Ina, I feel peaceful in the circle of that light.

  5. vivachange77 says:

    Thank you, Andrea.

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