Sometimes everything has to be enscribed across the heavens so you can find the one line already written inside you. Sometimes it takes a great sky to find that small, bright, and indescribable wedge of freedom in your own heart. David Whyte

Haiku: Water Music

on May 25, 2017

Quiet drizzly rain
Pinging drops on window pane
Mesmerizing sound

22 responses to “Haiku: Water Music

  1. Cethru Cellophane says:

    It’s raining now as I read – good timing Ina.

  2. β™₯ Eddie β™₯ says:

    I love rain so much I like to walk under the rain

  3. […] thank you… my haiku inspired by vivachange77 forever in debt ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Β© Mick E Talbot 2017/66 Inspired by vivachange77 […]

  4. micketalbot says:

    a babbling brook
    playing random notes no tune
    nature practicing

    water music plays
    a dipper bobs to its beat
    Handel eat your heart

    torrential rain
    tap dancing on my brolly
    surreal music

    hark hear Handle play
    water music natures way
    classic performance

    nightingales singing
    lullabies… day shutting eyes
    water music plays

    thank you… my haiku
    inspired by vivachange77
    forever in debt


  5. vivachange77 says:

    Mick, wonderful haiku. I am honored that mine is your inspiration. It is fun to have a conversation in poetry.

  6. Mmm, I love the sound of that kind of ‘water music’.

  7. Christy B says:

    The sound of rain has always been so comforting to me. Your words take me back to a nice memory πŸ™‚

  8. vivachange77 says:

    I checked it out and plan to watch it later. It is about AIDS ?

  9. JoHanna Massey says:

    Would just love a good rainfall this afternoon, but monsoon is a month or more away. I’ll enjoy your lovely words instead. Thank you.

  10. I of July says:

    delightful title πŸ™‚

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