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Sometimes everything has to be enscribed across the heavens so you can find the one line already written inside you. Sometimes it takes a great sky to find that small, bright, and indescribable wedge of freedom in your own heart. David Whyte

Haiku: Good Housekeeping

on April 4, 2017

Earth air water breath
Elements of life surround
Fragile in our care


8 responses to “Haiku: Good Housekeeping

  1. Cethru Celophane says:

    Nice. Food for thought here.

  2. Lovely Ina, there is fragility in the poem too, it’s as though it is perfectly balanced.

  3. vivachange77 says:

    Thank you , Andrea. I like the way you see aspects of my poem I wasn’t aware of.

  4. JoHanna Massey says:

    Yes. Thank you for your gentle reminders to what is important. 🌍

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