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Apr 4

Haiku: Good Housekeeping

by vivachange77 on April 4, 2017

Earth air water breath
Elements of life surround
Fragile in our care

Posted in Haiku, Meditation

8 responses to “Haiku: Good Housekeeping”

  1. Cethru Celophane says:
    April 4, 2017 at 2:35 pm

    Nice. Food for thought here.

    Reply
  2. vivachange77 says:
    April 4, 2017 at 6:59 pm

    Thanks, Nigel.

    Reply
  3. Andrea Stephenson says:
    April 7, 2017 at 6:16 pm

    Lovely Ina, there is fragility in the poem too, it’s as though it is perfectly balanced.

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  4. vivachange77 says:
    April 7, 2017 at 7:05 pm

    Thank you , Andrea. I like the way you see aspects of my poem I wasn’t aware of.

    Reply
  5. Lynz Real Cooking says:
    April 7, 2017 at 8:25 pm

    I love this one!

    Reply
  6. JoHanna Massey says:
    April 9, 2017 at 8:22 pm

    Yes. Thank you for your gentle reminders to what is important. 🌍

    Reply

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