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Small patch of pink clouds
Lit by sun just coming up
Previews things to come

Posted in Dawn Sky, Haiku, View from my window

Tags: Changing seasons, Dawn sky, Haiku, Poetry, View from my window

8 responses to “Haiku: Winter Sky Watch”

1. Andrea Stephenson says:

   November 19, 2016 at 8:21 pm

   I love the way the sun lights up the clouds from below – and the wings of the birds. Hope you had a good trip Ina.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     November 19, 2016 at 9:09 pm

     It was a lovely week. Every morning I took my coffee out on the balcony to watch the sun come up and listen to the birds. There was a small pool that made a gurgle and began its daily recycling of its water. This has been my morning routine whenever I am in Mexico.

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     • Andrea Stephenson says:

       November 19, 2016 at 9:11 pm

       Sounds blissful 🙂

2. vivachange77 says:

   November 19, 2016 at 9:14 pm

   Oh, Andrea, it is. ❤

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3. I of July says:

   November 25, 2016 at 10:38 pm

   ‘Sun coming up… Things to come’ really like that visualisation

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   • vivachange77 says:

     November 26, 2016 at 11:52 am

     Thanks for seeing this. I hadn’t intentionally paired the two uses of “come”.

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4. Lynz Real Cooking says:

   November 26, 2016 at 8:45 pm

   oh yes so lovely

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5. vivachange77 says:

   November 26, 2016 at 8:56 pm

   I appreciate your comment. ❤

   Reply

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