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Winter dawning sky
Lovely clouds with stripes of pink
Linger for my view

Sky of summer dawn
Early wash of rose and blue
Soon replaced by sun

I miss winter sky
In no hurry to move on
Seems a lot like me

Posted in Dawn Sky, Haiku

Tags: Changing seasons, Dawn sky, Haiku, Poetry, Winter beauty

7 responses to “Haiku: Changing Tempos”

1. Lynz Real Cooking says:

   August 4, 2016 at 5:09 pm

   Lovely!

   Reply
   • vivachange77 says:

     August 4, 2016 at 6:22 pm

     Thanks, Lynn.

     Reply
     • Lynz Real Cooking says:

       August 4, 2016 at 10:05 pm

       most welcome

2. I of July says:

   August 5, 2016 at 3:34 pm

   the closing stanza is profound

   Reply
   • vivachange77 says:

     August 5, 2016 at 4:02 pm

     Thanks for seeing deeply.

     Reply
3. Plakshi Jain says:

   August 17, 2016 at 9:56 am

   This is a perfect mixture of deep and amusing.

   Reply
   • vivachange77 says:

     August 17, 2016 at 10:58 am

     Thanks. I like your comment.

     Reply

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