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Earth air water fire
Basic elements surround
While I mediate

Candle flame and air
Unite, earth feeds potted plant
Thriving green nearby

Hot water coffee
Stirred, make brew to waken me
Prayers reach heavenward

Posted in Coffee, Haiku, Meditation

Tags: Earth elements, Haiku, Meditation, Poetry, Prayer

6 responses to “Haiku: Elemental Partners”

1. avinamdar says:

   July 23, 2016 at 12:49 pm

   Nicely written! Cheers 👍

   Reply
   • vivachange77 says:

     July 23, 2016 at 5:53 pm

     Thank you. 🙂

     Reply
2. I of July says:

   July 23, 2016 at 8:14 pm

   coherent composition with some clear connections… colourful 🙂

   Reply
   • vivachange77 says:

     July 23, 2016 at 9:39 pm

     I appreciate your in depth observations. That is what I was hoping for. Thanks.

     Reply
3. Lynz Real Cooking says:

   July 25, 2016 at 2:03 am

   Very nice

   Reply
4. vivachange77 says:

   July 25, 2016 at 10:41 am

   Thanks.

   Reply

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