cronechronicler

Tasting with closed eyes
Flavors penetrate my tongue
Joy to eat alone.

Listening eyes closed
Seeing music march on scales
Hearing notes anew.

Pinpoints of darkness
Bring to life like grains of salt
Hidden lovely things.

Posted in Daily Prompt, Haiku, The senses

Tags: Alive senses, Daily Prompts, Haiku, Poetry

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10 responses to “Haiku: Sense of Darkness”

1. Lynz Real Cooking says:

   July 9, 2016 at 1:16 am

   Lovely!

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   • vivachange77 says:

     July 9, 2016 at 11:20 am

     I’m glad you like it. 🙂

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2. Andrea Stephenson says:

   July 9, 2016 at 6:21 pm

   There is so much to discover when we do things mindfully 🙂

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   • vivachange77 says:

     July 9, 2016 at 7:25 pm

     So true. 🙂

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3. I of July says:

   July 11, 2016 at 8:57 pm

   that second stanza is excellent

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   • vivachange77 says:

     July 12, 2016 at 11:28 am

     Thank you, Heath.

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4. hbsuefred says:

   July 16, 2016 at 5:02 pm

   If only I hadn’t thought of weight scales v music scales when I read this! That part of my psyche will probably remain forever twisted.

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5. vivachange77 says:

   July 16, 2016 at 5:28 pm

   I like your seeing things your way as you read my poem. That is one of my favorite things about writing poetry – putting out words that people will use their imagination to connect.

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6. Eileen says:

   July 19, 2016 at 10:09 pm

   Particularly delightful. Took me into the experience with you. Yes, cutting down on sensory input does intensify experiences.

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7. vivachange77 says:

   July 20, 2016 at 11:44 am

   Thanks, Eileen. I like that you also experience this. I sometimes close my eyes to better understand British actors on some of my favorite PBS TV shows.

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