cronechronicler

Exploring the poetry of everyday life

Haiku: Redemption

on June 2, 2016

Emptiness floods me.
Purpose smaller than pin point
Replenishes soul


8 responses to “Haiku: Redemption

  1. Lovely, I like that replenishment of your soul in the last line.

  2. Sometimes something very small can change things. This is lovely

  3. vivachange77 says:

    Yes. It is amazing. Thanks.

  4. I of July says:

    I like the contradiction of emptiness and flood. And the ambiguity of purpose… pinpoint – which could also be interpreted as focus. The last line leaves one with a sense of fulfilment. Excellent execution 🙂

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