cronechronicler

Silence place I choose
Window open wide to world
Transports mind and heart.

Absent friendly noise
Hall outside apartment door
Quiet becomes a cage.

Posted in Haiku, solitude

Tags: Haiku, Poetry, Silence, solitude

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7 responses to “Haiku: Sound Interpretations”

1. Lynz Real Cooking says:

   March 22, 2016 at 1:54 pm

   Yes so true, quiet does become a cage, noise and people make things alive! nice haiku!

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   • vivachange77 says:

     March 22, 2016 at 1:58 pm

     Many thanks, Lynn.

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     • Lynz Real Cooking says:

       March 22, 2016 at 2:16 pm

       🙂

2. Arcane Owl says:

   March 22, 2016 at 2:07 pm

   Beautiful haiku…full of unexplainable emotions!

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   • vivachange77 says:

     March 22, 2016 at 2:12 pm

     Thanks for your comment. I’ve been feeling the difference between silence and quiet and today found expression for it.

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3. JoHanna Massey says:

   April 3, 2016 at 3:13 pm

   “Quiet becomes a cage.”

   I feel you really are getting into the very marrow of being human with these Haikus. I enjoy them so much and they do often abruptly stop me still to consider and reread several times. Thank you.

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4. vivachange77 says:

   April 3, 2016 at 3:54 pm

   Thanks for your comment on my Haikus. That is so lovely of you to say that I’m”getting into the very marrow of being human”. Often I have something to say about what is going on in my life but no thought of how to express it. I sit down to write and words come to the surface of my mind that translate my feelings into a Haiku. I am grateful.

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