Sometimes everything has to be enscribed across the heavens so you can find the one line already written inside you. Sometimes it takes a great sky to find that small, bright, and indescribable wedge of freedom in your own heart. David Whyte

Haiku: Sound Interpretations

on March 22, 2016

Silence place I choose
Window open wide to world
Transports mind and heart.

Absent friendly noise
Hall outside apartment door
Quiet becomes a cage.

7 responses to “Haiku: Sound Interpretations

  1. Yes so true, quiet does become a cage, noise and people make things alive! nice haiku!

  2. Arcane Owl says:

    Beautiful haiku…full of unexplainable emotions!

  3. JoHanna Massey says:

    “Quiet becomes a cage.”

    I feel you really are getting into the very marrow of being human with these Haikus. I enjoy them so much and they do often abruptly stop me still to consider and reread several times. Thank you.

  4. vivachange77 says:

    Thanks for your comment on my Haikus. That is so lovely of you to say that I’m”getting into the very marrow of being human”. Often I have something to say about what is going on in my life but no thought of how to express it. I sit down to write and words come to the surface of my mind that translate my feelings into a Haiku. I am grateful.

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