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Sentimental
Born in memory
Distillation slightly sweet
Colored palest mauve.

Passionate
Born of flesh and fire
Fermentation teases tongue
Colored deep red rose.

Posted in Haiku

Tags: Haiku, Poetry, Shading language

7 responses to “Haiku: Shades of Love”

1. Lynz Real Cooking says:

   March 9, 2016 at 7:21 pm

   Oh sounds nice!

   Reply
   • vivachange77 says:

     March 9, 2016 at 7:35 pm

     Thanks, Lynn.

     Reply
     • Lynz Real Cooking says:

       March 9, 2016 at 7:38 pm

       🙂

2. JoHanna Massey says:

   March 9, 2016 at 9:56 pm

   “fermentation teases tongue.” Oh that is delightful. Thank you.

   Reply
3. vivachange77 says:

   March 9, 2016 at 9:56 pm

   Glad you like it. Thanks. 🙂

   Reply
4. I of July says:

   March 11, 2016 at 11:33 am

   A sort of poetic portrait – perfect and accurate 🙂

   Reply
5. vivachange77 says:

   March 11, 2016 at 11:41 am

   Thanks, Heath. I like your phrase “poetic portrait”.

   Reply

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