Sometimes everything has to be enscribed across the heavens so you can find the one line already written inside you. Sometimes it takes a great sky to find that small, bright, and indescribable wedge of freedom in your own heart. David Whyte

Haiku: Parameters

on February 4, 2016

Some days world too wide
Coffee, over-easy egg
Help set things aright.

12 responses to “Haiku: Parameters

  1. Reading your Haiku posts and having a greater understanding of the rules, I feel optimistic that writing a Haiku post may be in my future. Thank you for taking me on the Haiku journey.

    • vivachange77 says:

      I’m glad that you’re considering writing haiku. I love the freedom of finding a few words to describe what is on my mind and heart. The discipline of only a specific number of syllables helps me get to the point. I think in terms of guidelines rather than rules. Happy sailing on your journey.

  2. So much fun, I like it!

  3. vivachange77 says:

    Thanks. Food can do wonders!

  4. Jay E. says:

    I resonate with this haiku, but have to have hash brown if my eggs are over easy.

  5. Eggs and coffee always make things better 🙂

  6. JoHanna Massey says:

    I enjoy your Haiku’s so very much. The brevity makes for such a depth of insight. You really do choose the ‘right’ words. Thank you.

  7. vivachange77 says:

    Thanks for your comment of what makes a haiku a unique way of communicating. I’m glad you like the ones I write.

  8. hbsuefred says:

    Alternate title “Comfort Food?”

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