cronechronicler

Pre-dawn howling wind
Candle flickers warm inside
Odd my soul at peace.

Posted in Dawn Sky, Haiku

Tags: Dawn sky, Haiku, Poetry, Prayer

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13 responses to “Haiku: Gift”

1. Eileen says:

   February 3, 2016 at 3:59 pm

   Yes….good description of grace.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     February 3, 2016 at 10:18 pm

     Thanks, Eileen.

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2. Lynz Real Cooking says:

   February 3, 2016 at 10:45 pm

   oh so warm and lovely!

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   • vivachange77 says:

     February 3, 2016 at 10:52 pm

     Thanks, Lynn.

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3. Azul Zaffre says:

   February 4, 2016 at 12:07 am

   Love the dichotomy.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     February 4, 2016 at 11:51 am

     Thanks for commenting.

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     • Azul Zaffre says:

       February 5, 2016 at 12:30 am

       Welcome.

4. Elan Mudrow says:

   February 4, 2016 at 6:22 am

   “Odd my soul at peace” I like how you put that.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     February 9, 2016 at 4:49 pm

     I appreciate your comment.

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5. Andrea Stephenson says:

   February 5, 2016 at 7:53 pm

   Love this – the howling wind and flickering candle, I feel peaceful too.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     February 5, 2016 at 10:11 pm

     I’m happy you feel peaceful.

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6. Susan Rowland says:

   February 5, 2016 at 8:42 pm

   “Odd my soul at peace” is brilliant ❤

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   • vivachange77 says:

     February 5, 2016 at 10:09 pm

     Thanks Susan. I’m beginning to believe in my haiku writing.

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