Haiku: Stage Fright

by vivachange77 on January 26, 2016

Gray clouds scurry east
Making way for star of show
Faint pink glows in wings.

Posted in Dawn Sky, Haiku

Tags: Dawn sky, Haiku, Poetry

12 responses to “Haiku: Stage Fright”

Lynz Real Cooking says:

January 26, 2016 at 1:57 pm

Lovely, the final line always brings it home to me so well and wraps up this beauty you are writing about!

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- vivachange77 says:
  
  January 26, 2016 at 3:19 pm
  
  Thanks for your perception. I always appreciate your thoughts on my writing.
  
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  - Lynz Real Cooking says:
    
    January 26, 2016 at 4:32 pm
    
    I love writing that makes me feel peaceful and serene!
  - vivachange77 says:
    
    January 26, 2016 at 6:03 pm
    
    I’m happy you feel peaceful.
SeasonedSistah2 says:

January 26, 2016 at 3:48 pm

Thank you, Viva for inspiring me to check out exactly what a Haiku poem is. I googled and learned that — Line 1 (5 syllables), Line 2 (7 syllables) and Line 3 (5 syllables). In this season of life, I love to learn and explore. Though, I am not likely to write a Haiku poem, I like knowing how one is written.

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- vivachange77 says:
  
  January 26, 2016 at 3:53 pm
  
  I’m glad you liked learning the ingredients of making a haiku. This is what I love to do, like others like to cook.
  
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Azul Zaffre says:

January 27, 2016 at 3:22 am

I really like the theme you’ve chosen for your blog…and it’s good to connect with you again 🙂

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- vivachange77 says:
  
  January 27, 2016 at 10:54 am
  
  Thanks. 🙂
  
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  - vivachange77 says:
    
    January 27, 2016 at 10:57 am
    
    Thanks for visiting my blog and following.
  - Azul Zaffre says:
    
    January 27, 2016 at 8:17 pm
    
    Welcome 🙂
Meredith says:

January 30, 2016 at 1:24 pm

Serene words, descriptive words, your word picture is beautifully written.

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- vivachange77 says:
  
  January 30, 2016 at 1:31 pm
  
  Thanks, Meredith. I appreciate your response to my word picture. ❤
  
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