cronechronicler

Gray clouds scurry east
Making way for star of show
Faint pink glows in wings.

Posted in Dawn Sky, Haiku

Tags: Dawn sky, Haiku, Poetry

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12 responses to “Haiku: Stage Fright”

1. Lynz Real Cooking says:

   January 26, 2016 at 1:57 pm

   Lovely, the final line always brings it home to me so well and wraps up this beauty you are writing about!

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   • vivachange77 says:

     January 26, 2016 at 3:19 pm

     Thanks for your perception. I always appreciate your thoughts on my writing.

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     • Lynz Real Cooking says:

       January 26, 2016 at 4:32 pm

       I love writing that makes me feel peaceful and serene!

     • vivachange77 says:

       January 26, 2016 at 6:03 pm

       I’m happy you feel peaceful.

2. SeasonedSistah2 says:

   January 26, 2016 at 3:48 pm

   Thank you, Viva for inspiring me to check out exactly what a Haiku poem is. I googled and learned that — Line 1 (5 syllables), Line 2 (7 syllables) and Line 3 (5 syllables). In this season of life, I love to learn and explore. Though, I am not likely to write a Haiku poem, I like knowing how one is written.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     January 26, 2016 at 3:53 pm

     I’m glad you liked learning the ingredients of making a haiku. This is what I love to do, like others like to cook.

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3. Azul Zaffre says:

   January 27, 2016 at 3:22 am

   I really like the theme you’ve chosen for your blog…and it’s good to connect with you again 🙂

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   • vivachange77 says:

     January 27, 2016 at 10:54 am

     Thanks. 🙂

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     • vivachange77 says:

       January 27, 2016 at 10:57 am

       Thanks for visiting my blog and following.

     • Azul Zaffre says:

       January 27, 2016 at 8:17 pm

       Welcome 🙂

4. Meredith says:

   January 30, 2016 at 1:24 pm

   Serene words, descriptive words, your word picture is beautifully written.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     January 30, 2016 at 1:31 pm

     Thanks, Meredith. I appreciate your response to my word picture. ❤

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