Sometimes everything has to be enscribed across the heavens so you can find the one line already written inside you. Sometimes it takes a great sky to find that small, bright, and indescribable wedge of freedom in your own heart. David Whyte

Haiku: Dawn Sky Costume Change

on January 15, 2016

Flaming pink at dawn.
Lovely teaser flirts with me
Then dons somber gray.

12 responses to “Haiku: Dawn Sky Costume Change

  1. The contrast of pink to gray here is lovely, showing well the sky’s different colors!

  2. I’m loving your series of dawn haiku, they describe the way my weather feels.

  3. vivachange77 says:

    I’m so glad you enjoy them and they express how your weather feels. I am amazed at the variety of skies – no two alike, like snowflakes.

  4. Love this, it is so true too!

  5. JoHanna Massey says:

    So good. Thank you for sharing.

  6. Nice job w/ the metaphor. Like the don.

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