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Jan 15

Haiku: Dawn Sky Costume Change

by poetrybyheart.me@poetrybyheart.me on January 15, 2016

Flaming pink at dawn.
Lovely teaser flirts with me
Then dons somber gray.

Posted in Dawn Sky, Haiku

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12 responses to “Haiku: Dawn Sky Costume Change”

  1. Christy Birmingham says:
    January 15, 2016 at 8:48 pm

    The contrast of pink to gray here is lovely, showing well the sky’s different colors!

    Reply
  2. Andrea Stephenson says:
    January 15, 2016 at 10:39 pm

    I’m loving your series of dawn haiku, they describe the way my weather feels.

    Reply
  3. vivachange77 says:
    January 15, 2016 at 10:44 pm

    I’m so glad you enjoy them and they express how your weather feels. I am amazed at the variety of skies – no two alike, like snowflakes.

    Reply
  4. Lynz Real Cooking says:
    January 16, 2016 at 4:36 pm

    Love this, it is so true too!

    Reply
  5. JoHanna Massey says:
    January 16, 2016 at 5:58 pm

    So good. Thank you for sharing.

    Reply
  6. Holistic Wayfarer says:
    January 19, 2016 at 3:54 am

    Nice job w/ the metaphor. Like the don.

    Reply

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