cronechronicler

Flaming pink at dawn.
Lovely teaser flirts with me
Then dons somber gray.

Posted in Dawn Sky, Haiku

Tags: Dawn sky, Haiku, Poetry

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12 responses to “Haiku: Dawn Sky Costume Change”

1. Christy Birmingham says:

   January 15, 2016 at 8:48 pm

   The contrast of pink to gray here is lovely, showing well the sky’s different colors!

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   • vivachange77 says:

     January 15, 2016 at 10:46 pm

     Thanks for your comment, Christy.

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2. Andrea Stephenson says:

   January 15, 2016 at 10:39 pm

   I’m loving your series of dawn haiku, they describe the way my weather feels.

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3. vivachange77 says:

   January 15, 2016 at 10:44 pm

   I’m so glad you enjoy them and they express how your weather feels. I am amazed at the variety of skies – no two alike, like snowflakes.

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4. Lynz Real Cooking says:

   January 16, 2016 at 4:36 pm

   Love this, it is so true too!

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   • vivachange77 says:

     January 16, 2016 at 4:48 pm

     Thanks. ❤

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     • Lynz Real Cooking says:

       January 16, 2016 at 5:02 pm

       Beautiful

5. JoHanna Massey says:

   January 16, 2016 at 5:58 pm

   So good. Thank you for sharing.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     January 16, 2016 at 6:55 pm

     And thanks for reading.

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     • JoHanna Massey says:

       January 18, 2016 at 2:37 pm

       Pleasure all mine.

6. Holistic Wayfarer says:

   January 19, 2016 at 3:54 am

   Nice job w/ the metaphor. Like the don.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     January 19, 2016 at 11:40 am

     Thanks. I appreciate the specifics in your comment.

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