cronechronicler

Exploring the poetry of everyday life

Reincarnation

on November 4, 2015

Branches bare of leaves
Golden carpet covers earth
Tree offers new gift.

Before break of day
In the sky bright stars I see
Now green leaves are gone.


17 responses to “Reincarnation

  1. J Lapis says:

    So lovely, and easy to visualize what you see. I’m trying not to panic about each newly bared branch…so silly, really.

  2. vivachange77 says:

    Thanks. I was sad to see the leaves go until I discovered they had been hiding the stars.

  3. Dalo 2013 says:

    Beautiful concept and truths with this ~

  4. vivachange77 says:

    I appreciate your comment. Thanks.

  5. Loved the way you opened this piece, branches are of leaves. You set the tone with one line. I am happy I stumbled upon your blog.

  6. vivachange77 says:

    Cheers to your becoming a published author. 🙂

  7. hbsuefred says:

    Well, since my house is on a hill, the leave don’t block the stars and, now that they’ve nearly all fallen off the branches, they just hide the lawn, which I’d like to be able to see before it too dies.

  8. vivachange77 says:

    I like the view from your house on a hill.

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