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Oct 7

Haiku: Moving On

by poetrybyheart.me@poetrybyheart.me on October 7, 2015

Writing 101
Done. Feet shake off the dust of past
Lead me who knows where.

Stories rouse from sleep
Words are waiting in the wings
Fill backpack anew.

Posted in Haiku

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4 responses to “Haiku: Moving On”

  1. Vibrant says:
    October 7, 2015 at 11:28 am

    Beautiful!
    I wonder if Haiku consisted of 3 lines with 3, 5, 7 syllables respectively. The other day one blogger told me about it!

    Love and light ❤
    Anand 🙂

    Reply
    • vivachange77 says:
      October 7, 2015 at 7:05 pm

      Thanks for your comment. The form of haiku I follow has three lines – line 1 has 5 syllables, line 2 has 7 syllables, and line 3 has 5 syllables. FYI in the first line of my haiku 101 counts as three syllables if it was spoken aloud.

      Reply
  2. J Lapis says:
    October 7, 2015 at 10:59 pm

    Words waiting in the wings–YES!!! And it’s always a crowd in my head’s wings, anyway 🙂

    Reply
  3. vivachange77 says:
    October 7, 2015 at 11:15 pm

    Love your comment. 🙂

    Reply

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