cronechronicler

Wild geese need no map
Nature’s compass deep within
Deftly guides their flight.

Posted in Changing seasons

Tags: Changing seasons, Haiku, Poetry, Travel, Writing 101

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16 responses to “Writing 101 – Haiku – Flight”

1. J Lapis says:

   September 30, 2015 at 12:40 pm

   Lovely haiku–and I do envy them their natural compass; I have Zero sense of direction…. 🙂

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   • vivachange77 says:

     September 30, 2015 at 3:56 pm

     I have a100 % opposite sense of direction. But I don’t dare trust it.

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     • J Lapis says:

       September 30, 2015 at 9:02 pm

       That’s amusing, as it would be nice to know you could just turn around and be headed in the right direction 🙂

     • vivachange77 says:

       September 30, 2015 at 9:10 pm

       🙂

2. Andrea Stephenson says:

   October 1, 2015 at 1:06 pm

   Ah, you remind me of the geese I saw flying over me yesterday on their way to warmer climes 🙂

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3. vivachange77 says:

   October 1, 2015 at 1:08 pm

   I enjoyed your comment. 🙂

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4. susielindau says:

   October 1, 2015 at 2:01 pm

   I’m directionally challenged and am in awe of migrating birds. Nice haiku!

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   • vivachange77 says:

     October 1, 2015 at 2:49 pm

     I have no sense of direction either. Thanks for your comment. 🙂

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5. Vibrant says:

   October 3, 2015 at 2:37 pm

   Beautiful. May I ask how do we write Haiku?

   Love and light ❤

   Anand 🙂

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   • vivachange77 says:

     October 3, 2015 at 4:07 pm

     It is a delight to tell you how to write haiku. The first line is five syllables (not words) long. The second line is seven syllables long. The third is five syllables long. A classic haiku has a twist at the end but mine do not always manage that. You can have only one stanza and a couple more are OK. Enjoy. Viva. ❤

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     • Vibrant says:

       October 3, 2015 at 4:09 pm

       575 OK. To manage a twist in that! LOL. Beyond my modest talents. I will be content watching you guys LOL 😀 Love and light. Thanks a lot 🙂

6. vivachange77 says:

   October 3, 2015 at 4:11 pm

   You’re welcome. Keep on with what you do best.

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7. Lynz Real Cooking says:

   October 18, 2015 at 1:21 pm

   Very nice!! I like it, nature is amazing!

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   • vivachange77 says:

     October 18, 2015 at 9:03 pm

     Thanks for your comment. 🙂

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8. I of July says:

   March 24, 2016 at 1:40 pm

   much substance, I love it!

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9. vivachange77 says:

   March 24, 2016 at 1:52 pm

   Thanks, Heath

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