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Aging over time
Like persistent rain erodes.
Treasures dear remain.

These I gather up
Held high like a petticoat
Secure from the mud.

Posted in Creative aging

Tags: Creative Aging, Haiku, Poetry, Remnants, Transitions

7 responses to “Haiku: Salvaging Operation”

1. Andrea Stephenson says:

   July 27, 2015 at 9:35 pm

   Lovely imagery of your treasures held close.

   Reply
2. I of July says:

   July 30, 2015 at 11:35 am

   nice one 🙂

   Reply
3. vivachange77 says:

   July 30, 2015 at 12:07 pm

   Thanks. 🙂

   Reply
4. thefeatheredsleep says:

   August 12, 2015 at 9:24 pm

   Equal brilliance. U are on fire.

   Reply
   • vivachange77 says:

     August 12, 2015 at 9:58 pm

     Thanks for your encouraging comment. 🙂

     Reply
5. hbsuefred says:

   August 15, 2015 at 6:47 pm

   I also thought the imagery was excellent.

   Reply
   • vivachange77 says:

     August 15, 2015 at 8:00 pm

     Thanks.

     Reply

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