cronechronicler

Exploring the poetry of everyday life

Haiku: State of My Year

on May 19, 2015

Half-way-between time.
Winter’s chills are behind me
Summer heat ahead.

Now whimsy-filled Spring
Locates soul’s ardent longings.
Promise uncertain.


14 responses to “Haiku: State of My Year

  1. Beautiful imagery in your words. ❤

  2. vivachange77 says:

    Thank you, Colleen. Your comments give me a lift. ❤

  3. Meredith says:

    Lovely descriptive words for the seasons.

  4. You explain the seasons well in few words – truly an art to be able to do so!!

  5. Plakshi Jain says:

    I love all your haiku. So perceptive and a pleasure to read.

  6. vivachange77 says:

    Thanks. Your thoughtful comments mean a lot to me.

  7. vivachange77 says:

    Thanks, Christy. I appreciate your critique of my writing. The form of haiku pushes me to hunt for essential words (in the sense of “essence”). I enjoy the challenge.

  8. I of July says:

    wish you a most splendid summer 🙂

  9. vivachange77 says:

    Thanks for your good wishes.

  10. I love the sense of the whimsical spring and the promise it might bring 🙂

  11. vivachange77 says:

    I love the poetry of your comment. Thanks.

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