cronechronicler

Exploring the poetry of everyday life

Haiku: Odd Birds

on April 25, 2015

My new neighbors honk.
Pair of geese who winter spent
Flying patterns rare.

Standing on my roof
Bellies full from neighbors’ crumbs
They seem quite content.


4 responses to “Haiku: Odd Birds

  1. Meredith says:

    We have a large pond near and geese fly over and honk for us in the spring

  2. This a poignant one-you are developing a way of showing the reader so much. Even though the poem is about the geese, I am feeling you as the watcher.

  3. vivachange77 says:

    Thank you, Susan. Your comments are so heartening. ❤

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