My life has been a rich bouquet
Composed of flowers, weeds and thorns.
I cherish, give value to every one
For different gifts they’ve given me.
Flowers bloomed beauty in my path.
Weeds put obstacles before me.
Thorns taught grappling with problems.
All were life lessons necessary.
My life has changed, bouquet no longer
My lot is now a fallow field
Ready to grow what seeds are planted.
My life’s become simplicity.
Time to be one rose complete.
For more is less and less is more.
It is like you are speaking right to me. Thank you.
Thanks. I’m glad. ❤
❤️
Lovely! Once again you say so much with few words. ❤
Thanks, Susan. Your reading and commenting on my writing means a lot to me. ❤
Sounds like you’ve learned to Abide.
Abide.That’s a great word to describe what I mean! Thanks and <3.
Beautiful words. I loved this message. 💖
Thanks, 🙂
Hey,
I’ve nominated you for the Very inspiring blogger award. You may see it here: https://shrutiinsights.wordpress.com/2015/02/28/im-happy-and-i-know-it/
If you choose to accept, which I hope you will you need to follow 4 rules. 1. Thank the blogger who nominated you. 2. List the rules and display the award. 3. Share seven facts about yourself. 4. Nominate (15) other amazing blogs and comment on their blog to let them know you nominated them.
Keep writing and inspiring,
Shruti
Thanks for reading my sonnet and commenting. I appreciate your nomination very much. Your visiting my blog and reading what I write is award enough for me. ❤
I love the metaphor. Nicely rendered.
Thank you.
Love the ending.
A single rose
is plenty.
Thank you.
I like that you value the weeds as much as the pretty flowers; they each teach us different lessons 🙂 ❤
Thanks. I think I value the weeds and thorns more than flowers because they make me grow. The flowers are always there no matter what if I look for them. I once sat beside a fallow field and learned to value it because in its being it already contained the nutrients for seeds and bulbs to grow, as long as rain and sun joined the cycle. ❤
acceptance & being one with nature – such a lovely poem 🙂
Thanks you. 🙂
There is such honesty in this haiku. Thank you for sharing.