cronechronicler

My life has been a rich bouquet
Composed of flowers, weeds and thorns.
I cherish,  give value to every one
For different gifts they’ve given me.

Flowers bloomed beauty in my path.
Weeds put obstacles before me.
Thorns taught grappling with problems.
All were life lessons necessary.

My life has changed, bouquet no longer
My lot is now a fallow field
Ready to grow what seeds are planted.

My life’s become simplicity.
Time to be one rose complete.
For more is less and less is more.

Posted in Becoming Myself

Tags: fallow field, Poetry, Sonnet, Writing 201:Poetry

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20 responses to “Writing 201: Poetry – Sonnet – One Rose”

1. pattyalcala says:

   February 27, 2015 at 8:21 pm

   It is like you are speaking right to me. Thank you.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     February 27, 2015 at 9:20 pm

     Thanks. I’m glad. ❤

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     • pattyalcala says:

       February 27, 2015 at 9:34 pm

       ❤️

2. Susan Rowland says:

   February 28, 2015 at 12:18 am

   Lovely! Once again you say so much with few words. ❤

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   • vivachange77 says:

     February 28, 2015 at 12:58 pm

     Thanks, Susan. Your reading and commenting on my writing means a lot to me. ❤

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3. jamesmumsical says:

   February 28, 2015 at 12:29 am

   Sounds like you’ve learned to Abide.

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4. vivachange77 says:

   February 28, 2015 at 12:57 pm

   Abide.That’s a great word to describe what I mean! Thanks and <3.

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5. Silver Threading says:

   February 28, 2015 at 1:16 pm

   Beautiful words. I loved this message. 💖

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   • vivachange77 says:

     February 28, 2015 at 1:51 pm

     Thanks, 🙂

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6. ShrutiInsights says:

   February 28, 2015 at 4:38 pm

   Hey,
   I’ve nominated you for the Very inspiring blogger award. You may see it here: https://shrutiinsights.wordpress.com/2015/02/28/im-happy-and-i-know-it/
   If you choose to accept, which I hope you will you need to follow 4 rules. 1. Thank the blogger who nominated you. 2. List the rules and display the award. 3. Share seven facts about yourself. 4. Nominate (15) other amazing blogs and comment on their blog to let them know you nominated them.
   Keep writing and inspiring,
   Shruti

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7. vivachange77 says:

   February 28, 2015 at 10:24 pm

   Thanks for reading my sonnet and commenting. I appreciate your nomination very much. Your visiting my blog and reading what I write is award enough for me. ❤

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8. menomama3 says:

   March 1, 2015 at 7:51 pm

   I love the metaphor. Nicely rendered.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     March 1, 2015 at 8:04 pm

     Thank you.

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9. Holistic Wayfarer says:

   March 2, 2015 at 12:43 am

   Love the ending.
   A single rose
   is plenty.

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10. vivachange77 says:

    March 2, 2015 at 1:46 am

    Thank you.

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11. Christy Birmingham says:

    March 3, 2015 at 6:01 pm

    I like that you value the weeds as much as the pretty flowers; they each teach us different lessons 🙂 ❤

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    • vivachange77 says:

      March 3, 2015 at 6:25 pm

      Thanks. I think I value the weeds and thorns more than flowers because they make me grow. The flowers are always there no matter what if I look for them. I once sat beside a fallow field and learned to value it because in its being it already contained the nutrients for seeds and bulbs to grow, as long as rain and sun joined the cycle. ❤

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12. lauzlau says:

    March 9, 2015 at 2:51 am

    acceptance & being one with nature – such a lovely poem 🙂

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    • vivachange77 says:

      March 9, 2015 at 11:07 am

      Thanks you. 🙂

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13. JoHanna Massey says:

    February 24, 2016 at 3:00 pm

    There is such honesty in this haiku. Thank you for sharing.

    Reply

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