cronechronicler

Shimmering in dreams.
Desired promise to quench thirst
Beckons one more step.

Posted in Daily Prompt, Haiku

Tags: Daily Prompts, Haiku

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8 responses to “Daily Prompt: Oasis”

1. preciouspen1955 says:

   January 8, 2015 at 3:04 pm

   Keep taking those steps , lovely poem and words true and real , a poem that speaks hope to me lovely thank you. xx

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   • vivachange77 says:

     January 8, 2015 at 3:42 pm

     Thanks for your words of encouragement. i’m happy my poem speaks hope to you. ❤

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2. Christy Birmingham says:

   January 8, 2015 at 7:19 pm

   The thirst for the next step is compelling in this poem!

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   • vivachange77 says:

     January 8, 2015 at 7:34 pm

     Thanks for your comment. 🙂

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3. Susan Rowland says:

   January 9, 2015 at 2:34 pm

   The last line is powerful! Keep up the good work. 🙂

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   • vivachange77 says:

     January 9, 2015 at 2:44 pm

     Thanks. That is the line I gave most thought to.

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4. Love Happy Notes - Daily Fun and Inspiration says:

   January 26, 2015 at 11:07 am

   I love this. So beautiful and inspiring.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     January 26, 2015 at 11:54 am

     Thank you. Thanks for the” likes” on other haiku. I’ve missed you and am happy to hear from you. ❤

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