cronechronicler

Wind I cannot see.
Blowing leaves hint where to look
Wind howls, leaves no doubt.

Posted in Haiku

Tags: Haikus, Poetry, Wind howls

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6 responses to “Haiku Challenge Number Twenty: Hunt and Wind”

1. Christy Birmingham says:

   December 5, 2014 at 11:31 pm

   Aha, very clever! The wind can have such an impact on the world and yet it is unseen… I like this haiku.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     December 6, 2014 at 11:59 am

     Thanks, Christy.

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2. PuppyDoc (Phoebe) says:

   December 6, 2014 at 3:56 pm

   Very nicely written. Describes it perfectly. 🙂

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   • vivachange77 says:

     February 8, 2015 at 10:30 pm

     Many thanks. 🙂

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3. preciouspen1955 says:

   December 8, 2014 at 11:18 pm

   Just love the complexity here that the word leaves manages to create for me in this poem.
   Happy Days Kathy.

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   • vivachange77 says:

     December 9, 2014 at 2:04 am

     Thanks. The two “leaves” were unintentional and then I left them in. Glad you like it.

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