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Weekly Haiku Challenge Number 15: Promise and Gift

on October 22, 2014

Promise – future tense.
Pledge in faith to hold in trust.
Gift bears present fruit.


6 responses to “Weekly Haiku Challenge Number 15: Promise and Gift

  1. “Pledge in faith to hold in trust.” what a mysterious sentence to me and an interesting hinge between present and future. Very well done, Vivachange!

  2. Aquileana says:

    Great… the first verse is perfect… Congratulations!… best wishes, Aquileana 😛

  3. Karuna says:

    wow…….love it!

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