Sometimes everything has to be enscribed across the heavens so you can find the one line already written inside you. Sometimes it takes a great sky to find that small, bright, and indescribable wedge of freedom in your own heart. David Whyte

Haiku: Leaves and Summer

on October 20, 2014

Leaves fall, branches bare
Trace brown fingers cross the sky.
Summer’s art replaced.

7 responses to “Haiku: Leaves and Summer

  1. Silver Threading says:

    That is lovely. It reminds me of the quiet after a snowfall. Everything would be muffled and the only sound was the crunching of your boots as you walked. Great memories and an excellent Haiku!

  2. vivachange77 says:

    Thanks for your comment. I was thinking of the quiet as I wrote.

  3. vivachange77 says:

    I realized that you are responding to my first version of the haiku. I rewrote it in the same post space. I’m glad you liked the first one. I love the quiet times of winter, like new snow.

  4. A new art indeed! Well done Vivachange! 🙂

  5. lauzlau says:

    Beautiful Haiku, “summer’s art replaced.” Very true. 🙂

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