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Saturday – A Haiku

on October 11, 2014

Week’s loose ends still frayed.
Will I choose to unravel,
Slip knots into ease?


7 responses to “Saturday – A Haiku

  1. Really like “slip knots into ease.” So original!

  2. vivachange77 says:

    Thanks. That’s one of those aweing instances when the words just “slipped” into place.

  3. Nice Haiku! I’d say do it 😉

  4. […] Saturday – A Haiku. I like this Happy birthday Haiku. I’ll adopt it as my own today, although I’m 67, not 13. ❤ […]

  5. carolyninjoy says:

    I love this & HAD to reblog it for my own birthday today!
    Every word is perfectly placed.

    “Week’s loose ends still frayed.
    Will I choose to unravel,
    Slip knots into ease?”

  6. vivachange77 says:

    Happy birthday! ❤ Thanks for your comment. I'm so glad you liked my Haiku.

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