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Aug 28

Pain and Peace: Weekly Haiku Challenge # 7

by vivachange77 on August 28, 2014

Loss of former days.
Candles burned at both their ends
Gutter into rest.

Posted in Haiku, Poetry

5 responses to “Pain and Peace: Weekly Haiku Challenge # 7”

  1. Meredith says:
    August 29, 2014 at 2:53 pm

    I got a vivid picture from your poem.

    Reply
  2. vivachange77 says:
    August 29, 2014 at 3:06 pm

    Thanks, Meredith.

    Reply
  3. RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Prompt Challenge Rewind #7 | ronovanwrites says:
    September 1, 2014 at 2:12 am

    […] of CroneChronicler : “I got a vivid picture from your poem.”-Meredith of Meredith’s […]

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  4. JoHanna Massey says:
    August 14, 2018 at 9:08 pm

    Such a clear image you have created. So good. Thank you.

    Reply

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